Description of my brother

Hello, now I will describe my litlle brother called Antoni, he Is 12 years old and now he Is in the first of ESO.
My brother Is a tall boy for his age, but he Is thin, he has got short hair, big brown eyes and finally he has a small nose.
In general he Is a nice person, often nervous because he doesn't like losing but he Is still responsible because he always does what we tell him. He Is very friendly, he has got many friends and he tries to do everything possible to help they.
In conclusion, I believe that my brother Is a demon , only with me , because we are always fighting, but I love him.
In the background he Is a nice boy.

Once Upon a Time

  I think that the story of Once Upon a Time is very imaginative and creative.

Once Upon a Time talks about the history where Emma Swan, comes to Storybrooke, a small city of the USA where her son resides, who she had given in adoption after being born. What Emma doesn't know, but her son does, is that each and every of the inhabitants of this small city are actually the prominent figures of all the fairy-tales that you could imagine.
Overall I liked the story but I would like to see what comes next.

Once Upon a Time

I think the story ends happily though a bad start. At first the witch is making the rounds for that to hurt the Snow White, until there comes a time when the witch is punished and dies attacked by gnomes because she was very bad person and she was did a lot of  bad things .
While Snow White, after all that has happened, she get once and for all to live happily and without any concern, next to her boyfriend and his best friends gnomes.

Self evaluation about my presentation

Presentation (10%): 1 point

Do you use any resources: PowerPoint, video, images, sound, real item ...?

Yes, I  use a Power Point.

Are there just key words to explain your message?

Yes, a litlle bit.

Body language & eye contact (10%): 1 point

Are you looking at your audience Most of the Time?

Yes I always look at the audience.

Are you reading from your notes occasionally?

Yes, I sometimes read when  I do not remember anything.

Structure (10%): 1 point

Do you organize your ideas in order of Importance (chronological order), with different parts?

Yes, I do. I have got an introduction, the body and conclusion.

Content (40%): 3 points

Do you introduce new information to your audience?

Yes, I do, because I think that is a good idea to learn a litlle bit the culture etc ... for the people who listen me.

Is your information detailed and comprehensible?

Yes It is, but the problem Is that I speak very fast.

Do you give / show examples?

Yes, I give images and examples.

Language (20%): 1.3 points

Is your grammar correct, complex (verbs, word order, tenses Learnt in class)?

It is not entirely correct because when you're in front of so many people you get nervous.

Is your vocabulary rich, varied with linkers (and, but, also, although ...)?

Yes, but I can do it better.

Pronunciation & Intonation (10%): 0.5 points

Do you know how to pronounce all your words?

Yes, I know.

Dou you speak in a fluid continuum Or With breaks and Interruptions?

I speak in a fluid continuum.

What have you done well? What do you need to improve?

Overall I think I made ​​a good presentation though. That I could I have improved somewhat, for Such Further study to know everything by heart, but I'm still happy with my work.

Description of my bedroom

My favorite place to relax is my bedroom. I like this place, because it is where I feel comfortable, and it is a warm place to stay. It has many things I like; for example, it has a big bed with a many pillows around, and it has two windows where I can see the garden in the back yard. There I have my own television and VCR. I have pictures of Real Madrid Team and of my family on the wall to remember them every day.
My bedroom has enough light. There I can stay for hours because there I feel secure, happy, and free. My bedroom represents me, because there the decorations show what things I like. I decorated it with games, plants, chairs, pictures, films, and other stuff. The bedroom I have here in Spain looks like my bedroom in my country Krasnodar (Russia).
My favorite place is a place where I can feel comfortable and happy. Because my bedroom has all these characteristics, I can call it my favorite place to relax.